You and I


If you had been an artist,

then, I be the piece of your art.

If you had been a musician,

then, I be the rhythm of your heart.

If you had been a painter,

then, I be the vision of you eye.

if you had been an engineer,

then I be your machine personified.

if you had been a poet,

then, I be your pouring emotion.

If you had been a lover,

then, I be your crazy passion.

But, since you are nobody

and hence everybody

I am the bearer of your absence,

and the marker of your presence.

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About jyoti

with her trailing gaze the shy maverick clings on and through the supple foreplay of her aesthetic sense and a beatific smile insatiates the mellifluous melange!! View all posts by jyoti

2 responses to “You and I

  • adhrit

    इसे पढ़ने वाले दो ही तरह कि टिप्पणी कर सकते है.. पहला यह कि साधारण छंद है या फिर दूसरा ये कि बेहतरीन है| वो कहते है न लोग अलग नज़रिए अलग. उम्दा पेशकश| बहुत कुछ सोचा से पढ़ के| खुश रहिये आबाद रहिये| ऐसी ही कलमो के साथ आते रहिये|

    • jyoti

      If you were to ask me, I would say that the poem would have been nothing had there been no last two lines in this poem. The last two lines for me are quite strong and poignant. But then its my creation, I will always manage to find something good in it. 😛

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